Very Good
I really enjoyed it, great style and animation. You should submit more like that, but with more of a story. And yeah, a preloader+small menu would have been good, you might as well after all the effort of animating.
Reviews for "my random flash"
pretty good for a frame by frame
that was actually a great flash but too short.
graphics were excellent, very little bad things i can say bout them;
your style was NOT fbf but good nonetheless;
sound was good and did not repeat badly;
the ball was well made and cool;
you need a pleloader or at least a play button;
there wasnt much humor but i liked the chasing of the butterfly;
overall too short but excellent, please finish it and explain whats going on.
Experiment?
For an experiment that was VERY good! I liked the animation a lot. I'd like to see you finish it for an extracaricular activity so we can see what it's like as a complete product.
Great work! I hope there's more to come!
So...
The looping really sucked. But the flash was pretty good. Still needs an ending. GET TO WORK...
Paradox321 responds:
haha thanks for all your comment guys. just thought i'd let you all know that it was a project and i ran out of time which was why the ending kinda got cut short. i had to put it up here for testing and evaluation but thanks for all your constructive comments
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Beautiful, great, whatever!
^_^
One thing: Don't loop.
5/5