Needs ALOT of work
I to build and design flash games. So, I know how hard they can be to develop. Some words of advice from a skilled programmer, and game designed: Spend ALOT more time in development before making your release public. Also, I see nothing wrong with coping someone elses style of game, as long as you are improving or changing it. Good luck though. I think with time, and a whole lot more effort your work will improve.