Your on the right track
just try to make it go faster like if you used rounds of 5 frams for each action turn it into 2 or 3
edit the music down so you only have what you need or else it continuesless plays even after its done and it makes loading your movie a bitch
but not bad for your first one. lol sorry but I rated you a 1, if his got on then all ym flahses that didn't make it would seem worse.. not that they were that good to begin with