It has potential
My friend....you have potential to be a good flash artist, please to not take this in the wrong way, but the animation cound have a point, at this tiem it seems somewhat random. Next time, try a story of some sorts.
Reviews for "Goninzula 5"
acdcrox2999 responds:
Don't worry I understand completely, and I agree, it was quite random. I'll try to give a better plot next time. Thanks for the advice though.
right then
ok i liked the ac/dc shirt lol and i like the idea u have but needs a better plot and storyline and then maybe you could turn this into an episode but it needs alot of work
acdcrox2999 responds:
Thanks, and the AC/DC shirt does kick ass :P. But I'll try to make it have an actual plot. Like I said this was just test.
ok
i liked the main silent move thing, just improve on it.
acdcrox2999 responds:
Im just waiting for a plot to come to me, after that happens, it will be great I hope.
wazint good
let me just say this i didint like it ..... it waz just to weird and the music could of been better as well
acdcrox2999 responds:
i am guessing you didn't get the fact that it was supposed to be a silent movie.
needs more
this movie started well but when the monster guy came out and the talk started the words came and left way to fast.
acdcrox2999 responds:
Alright, I'll try to fix that up. Thanks for the advice though.