Why stop the music!
It was going great until the music stopped and the characters started talking.
Why stop the music!
It was going great until the music stopped and the characters started talking.
Yeah, I know you thought it was serious up until that didn't you?! I think it's funny all the way through. It's very ironic in the style.
It fell apart at the end
It was good up until the end, then it sucked.
It did not.
cool graphix
get a female to do the fem voice overs, you sound too strained when you do them
Thank you! I think it's knda funny though - The voices were never meant to be serious!
Is that Gloria's older brother?
Fred is singing! Fred is singing! I know that voice! Fred is singing! Your person looks like Gloria's *POSSIBLE* older bro. Good work, again.
Haha, yeah.. I'm Fred (you do know he's not a real person, don't you?).
The song is from my local band. We used to have a home page -
listen.to/criticalhit
You can check it out, if you'd like to!
Pretty good first attempt!
Okay lets see if I can do my hand of constructive critism. First of all, I loved the stylistic approach of the characters in this one. The flash was just downright beautiful. The preloader did not seem to work (I'm running off a DSL, and more than a 30 seconds wait for a 1 MEG file makes me antsy heh). For some reason, the music ended about half way (I don't know anything about flash, so I don't know what causes that), leaving the movie a bit silent. The music was so good! Heh, I guess that's why it felt odd watching the rest of the movie without it. Also you might want to consider real females for your female characters, just a thought ;-). Otherwise WOW a great flash toon!
In this movie I wanted to use normal fram to frame animation. I didn't quite go all the way though- I animated Play walking and going into the plane, but then I realized how much time it would take and decided to tween some more :)
I recorded all voices myself,and I think it sound funny, stupid-but funny :)
No more episodes comming in this series as no one cared about this movie until I got famous with Ytown Public.