Not bad.
It was pretty good. Although the 2nd one where he exploded by cutting the tape with brush made no sense. And you mixed in some NES sprites. Not a good idea. Super Mario World has a spring you know. Other than that, it was ok for a first go.
Reviews for "Super mario world blooper"
good for ur first try
Ur video was good but i had a bad time loadin' it and if u choose screen selection the main music still sound. however it's a nice flash for ur first time
better than average sprite flash
This is a better than average sprite flash. You didn't edit the sprites to much to make lots of blood or whatever. You didn't mix sprites. Next time try not doing a sprite flash I think this is the best that can be done with them.
Not bad..I could actually use tips from you!
That's your 1st flash? Well good job. Usually most first submissions suck. It ran smooth. I always enjoy Mario Bros. parodies.
Definitely needs improvement, but good first step!
The sprites were a bit shaky and fast, but they seem hard to do so I think that's just experience. The second and last blooper were pretty funny, but the first was a bit too similar to another flash movie and the third one doesn't make any sense to me (did the star fall down the pit or something?) The use of sound is also just a bit off at points, but the fact that it's your first movie and it has a select scene screen, load page, play button, credits and a replay button makes it better than many other submitted flashes. This one just is not the best thing I've ever seen.