i thought it was funny
not bad i think it was funny but next time make it more clear what they are saying cause i think they were speaking like spanish or something. also might want to work a bit on the hand art it would help.
Reviews for "CRAZY SONIC"
MKFP-lennychuckles responds:
SLOVAK LANGUAGE ;)
Definitely original!
It's definitely original, I'll give you that. The translation to english is far from perfect, but most of it is understandable. And it had it's funny parts (I enjoy the randomness of it all!) Graphics aren't perfect, but animation is decent, and the sound seems to fit well (although it does stop for the last few scenes). And there are some random scenes that flash in for about half a second and make the viewer confused, but that's a bug you just need to fix.
I say good job for a first animation and I hope you complete it for fun.
MKFP-lennychuckles responds:
This isn't first but old.When i started.
......and thanx !!!1!1
pretty cool :)
If you've only made a few flashes before and made this mainly by FbF, it's pretty good! it was quite funny as well. the only advice i can give you is to use more shading, and make the backdrops as detailed as possible- multicoloured blocks to represent doors look UGLY.
keep practicing on a pen and pad as for the characters and practice backdrops on paint. the easiest way to do good rooms is to draw a rectangle to represent the wall that the camera is facing, and draw a line from each corner in the desired direction. its all practice my friend :)
WTF?
Very corny!
But luckily that made it quite funny and random. It's fairly obvious you need to improve the quality of every aspect of your flash(especially graphics and sound). I think you will be good at creating random flash where very strange random things happen. This will probably get turd of the week!
(if it doesn't get blammed)
ERRM... What?
Okay so I must ask that next time you try to atleast make an attempt at using grammar, just an idea. And having better sound quality, that got on my nerves too. Perhaps to to make nothing like this ever again is the bottom line.
MKFP-lennychuckles responds:
english is awesome.
I know. subtitles I made to this old crap for 30 min.so....And this is submitet for fun and this here is. I was shocked.