Hmm..
Well...the transition at 0:58 is just wowzors :D The panning after than wasn't too good though IMO. 1:45 was amazing how you made the effect fade in so smoothly with that melo. Also, I think the kick is a bit too 'clicky' at 2:39. The melody after that was very good (I'm not sure on this but I think it's a different melo to the panning melo at the start), it should've gone for a bit longer.
Still, this deserves a 10/10 :)
Good luck with your next song, I want to see a hit by you XD