Some more music
Great anyway... but most of the time we don't have any background music... the rest of the elements of the flash were great though, they weren't astounding graphics but it was compensated by the humourous characters and the idea... nice intro also... hehe WILL wait to see the part II... Cheers!
Not bad! ^_^
First off, I'd like to thank you for using my music in your animation. I've been having alot of trouble exposing my music lately, and deeply appreciate all the help I can get.
Now, on to the review!
GRAPHICS: 7
I think your art skills show alot of talent, but could use some polishing, here and there. Also, I noticed at times that your artwork was reminiscent of Legendary Frog.
STYLE: 9
Once again, some elements I noticed from Legendary Frog popping up in your style. Don't get me wrong though that's not a bad thing. I love his style. Just make sure you evolve and break away from it when you're ready.
SOUND: 6
Not very well executed. You might want to find someone to help you out with female voices. And there are freeware programs (or hackable programs if ya know what I'm talkin' about ~_^ ), that remove pops and crackles from recorded audio. I don't know any off hand, but I'm sure google won't fail you. Nothing to criticize about the music. But it would have sounded nice if you'd faded it in at the begining and faded it out at the end, so it wouldn't just cut in and out like that. Once again, there's audio programs that can do that.
Violence: 7
Not much of it to speak of, and I don't know why it's a menu option in the review box. Oh well. I'm unofficially declaring that "violence" now covers the coreographing and execution of fight-scenes, as well as violence. They weren't bad, and they were fairly well paced, but you could have made it flow a little better. Don't worry, you'll get better over time.
Interactivity: 4
Also, I hate this menu option as well. So I'm unofficially changing it to cover "programming skills and execution," as well as interactivity. Nothing to interact with besides menu items, so I never give anything a higher than five with that in mind. However, You've got a play button, a replay button, I think I saw a link or two, and a loading screen. The loading screen could have had a bar, so you could see how far it was done, so I'm taking 1 point off for that.
Humor: 9
Mmmmmmmmm.... Humor. Actually to be perfectly honest I've never played WoW, so I didn't get most of the jokes. That's why I'm giving it a high score. Must admit though, I now almost feel like playing WoW. Almost. (pssssst... I dislike Massively Money-Eating Online RPGs).
OVERALL!
Basically, I enjoyed the animation overall. The graphics were decent, and the style had little to criticize. Sound was buggy, but it did the trick. The fight scenes were alright, but they could have moved a little faster. That takes a lot of trial and error though, so no finger pointing there. There wasn't really Interactivity, but you had the basic menu options, and aside from the lack of loading bar, I had nothing to complain about. Even though I've never played WoW, I still found some of the jokes pretty funny. Also, I am now looking into WoW to see if it can be hacked (oops, was that my outside font?).
FINAL VERDICT: 8
keep up the good work man! ^_^
P.S. Check out my animation!
Hehe, wow, a serious analysis! Thanks for all the advice, I didn't really learn anything about sound yet, and I definitely plan on spending more time on that. I've also gone out and found all kinds of tutorials on menu options and stuff. Unfortunately, as far as art goes, I am completely graphically fixed, and I can't seem to learn audio that well. I'll keep practicing and hopefully the WiWoW ep.2 will be well-done all around =P
Pretty Nice
Pretty sweet animation you got here. I can't wait for the third. Really nice job and with even more practice I can't wait to see what kind of flash animator you will turn out to be. Nice graphics too.
Love it!
The best parody of WoW i've seen yet. GJ on the paladin! Also the best troll voice I've heard. I play WoW regularly and find tis parody accurate in most ways. And by the way,FOR THE HORDE!!
i hate wow
but i like you rflash. most funny thing i have seen in _years_ (really!).