Meh
Not really funny till the end but i really didnt understand it
Reviews for "Matrix -- Real Life"
Hmm
For what it was, the cartoon was good. Not everything on NG has to be some long, drawn out cartoon where the artist is simply creating filler to ad seconds onto the length.
Really, you did all that was needed to get your point across. It's the 'toons with eons of boring blank spots that get on MY nerves.
Good job, but perhaps improve the voice-over quality and do something about that gun at the end.. it looked like some kinda square-ish baseball bat for a second there. =P
G3K responds:
Yeah, I wasn't really aiming for anything exceptionally long, it was just a way of filling up an otherwise boring day. =P
I know about the voiceacting, I've had that problem for a while.. I've flung subs into every Flash I've made to try and recover whatever I can in that respect but it's never really been enough. As for the shotgun.. I got tired toward the end so quality suffered as a consequence. =P
In closing, thanks for the review. ^^
needs work... alot of it
umm... wow what a great little 20 second film u had there 0_o.
i can tell ur a good artist by the graphics of the person u created but wheres the plot, wheres the entertainment?
i would suggest making a series of scenes from the matrix movies and put them together instead of doing just one spinoff.. it would give a much greater effect to the audience. work on the voices, work on the annoying sound when the bunny thing comes up and put some more work in to the animation. all i really saw was a computer screen popping windows up and a guys mouth moving? go to help in your flash program and look up motion tweens 0_o, it will help u alot!!!
oh yea btw, i luved the oldschool style song u had at the end! good job on that. it fits in with the low graphics on the computer.
G3K responds:
I know, the plot's a bit of a niche subject. I very nearly didn't submit this on the basis that it'd be too obscure. :\
Animation-wise, yeah, I know about motion tweens and such forth.. I used them for the opening code scene. I just personally feel that they're overused in Flash and felt like giving frame-by-frame animation a go.
Aanyway, thanks for the critique. ( '-')b