No.
^^Good Points^^
Graphically this flash was well done. The shading was excellent, and the drawings were well done as well. Very nice.
^^Needs Improving^^
I read your edit to the description, and I don't care. I still watched it and will still review it. This was bad. It had absolutely no point whatsoever. There was not storyline that went anywhere, though breadfruit went many places. A storyline would supplement this quite well!