Pretty good
I can't really think of anything to say about this, considering I did like it. A few questions for notok860 though:
1. How can you not be able to spell the world "write"? Just because this is the internet doesn't mean you're entitled to bad grammar...
2. As far as I'm concerned, Snake's trying to scam large amounts of people out of small amounts of money. How else would the boxes write letters?