s`alright... kinda
The text is kind fast, and you could make the movement a little smoother (higher frame rate, slower sprite animations). Plus, it is pretty short. If you made the ep. just a little bit longer, with more content I probably would have given a better score.
desent
Text was way too fast. Animation was good though, slow down text and make it a bit longer and you have a good flash
Need's Work
That was horible you can't make the text go so fast some people can't even read it if you fixed the mistakes this might be worth watching :(
needs work
it ends too fast and there is alot missing from the plot
Sry
The Text was to fast to read so if it gets blammed make the text slower and resubmit it.