finally, i new good flash artist
you should make your episodes shorter, and this flash needs a interesting charater for more excitement.
Reviews for "DoubleWide - Episode 1"
Great Debut!
Wow, this was an amazing first episode. You really put a lot of effort into everything you did. The animation and backgrounds were really well done, and you'll definitely improve on that as you move along. I loved the sounds, especially when you threw in the Dukes of Hazard clip. It didn't sound edited in at all; it sounded like it was part of the show. In terms of humor, this made me chuckle a few times, and I can see that it's building up to be pretty funny. I know the son will play into some of the future humor, and definitely their new neighbor. I'm looking forward to future episodes.
Little things I loved: the dog running along behind them, the chicken fry 5000 commercial, and how Bill reminded me of George W. Bush. Was that on purpose, or is the similarity just that good?
hoim responds:
Back_Door_Baron - keep watchin' for episode Two... you'll get an even better look at who Bill is!! :) I still have to submit part two of episode one first though. Which is coming shortly.
mmmm..cheesy puffs on the map...
funny stuff man, thats was really good animation, good sound too, poor kid...'i took 'is leg clean of, were goin' to hell woman' lol cool clip!
Nice imagery, simple humour; fairly nice overall
Good first part to what I assume is to be a series, fairly simple, primitive humour. The imagery and graphics are very well done and it have some good effects included. The sound was perfectly reasonable and I indeed liked the folk music at the beginning, good job!
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