Nice job
Great art, usually people use sprites but you're not one of the lazy ones. Too short though, i'll be waiting for the completed version.
Reviews for "Amy & Friends"
ElsonWong-Darkspeeds responds:
Wow! Thank you for your feedback Gamemaster93! Please understand that this is my fist day here in Newgrounds.com and having recieved a mixed bag of feedback from a foreign site is new experience for me.
Thank you for your encouragement, this animation was used only to test out how flash works! ^^ I'll see what I can do in future with regards to this short animation of Amy going shopping with friends at X-mas. *thumbs up*
It was okay...
But god, I am so sick of sonic cartoons.
Keep at it!
While you are quite correct in saying that this is a work incomplete, I think you show promise with this short peek. Good, quality animation and vibrant colors really draw the eye. I didn't much care for the music, but that's a personal taste. It matched the scene well, so my opinion on that really dosen't matter. I recommend adding a little more detail to background characters. The squiggles you use don't give us the feel of being in a living, vibrant world. Now, in flash this normally would not be a problem, but you have VERY vibrant main characters, your background needs to complement them. Of course they SHOULD be less vibrant and detailed than the main characters, but they should also lend creedence to the world around them. I think you will find that the extra effort put into this little detail will greatly expand the depth of your flash. But take my advice with a grain of salt. The best thing to do is keep at it and have fun!
ElsonWong-Darkspeeds responds:
Wow! Thank you for your feedback The1truecell! Please understand that this is my fist day here in Newgrounds.com and having recieved a mixed bag of feedback from a foreign site is new experience for me.
Thank you so kindly for taking your time and providing me with an analytical and constructive criticism. This animation was intentionally used to test out how flash works in the beginning so a lot of the stuff I did here was mainly for practice to check out how things work with Flash. = )
Oh gawwd the squiggly people!! XXD I was going to replace all of those with individually drawn characters but I just didn't have the opportunity costs to do and then again that would destroy the purpose of the exercise. ^_^
I like how you talked about how the BG need to complement the characters. That's an awesome piece of advice and I do look forward to how you will interpret my other animations that have been completed most recentely (that's if you have the time of course!) LOL! XD
And yes indeed, very true are your parting words...
'The best thing to do is keep at it and have fun!'
I sure do and I sure will! ^_~
Hmm...
Hey, your'e a great drawer and everything but I didn't get the point in making this ''movie'' about Amy and her friends walking in a mall for 20 seconds. The movie sucks but I give you credit for the awesome drawing.
Not bad
Dude if you want to get good ratings and awards make your shows longer and better, you cant just keep on going on by maing 2 miniute long shows do better.