You really did a good job
This music video was perfect, the movie fits very well with the tone of the song, GJ there. There's nothing else to say about it.
Now for the graphics, there were good but some items had a strange color, the orange for the desk and the green for the empty bottle per exemple, were horrible. For the desk, the orange of the green shirt girl would a been great but the current orange is ugly....
Also your main protagonist as girlish eye, you should make them more.... manly
But those are only detail but for futur stuff don't use any colors like that orange and green -_- and work on those yes, there good for girl character but not for male.
OTHERWISE, GJ, 8.5/10 i looking foward to see more stuff from you