Umm...
Dude. That was lame. First off, it was way too short (It took pretty long to load for how crappy picture quality was) There was no plotline, no cleverness, no real violence, not much of anything, as a matter of fact. Twas just.... some guy.
I think it needs a lot of work, but I see how you can become a lot more... constructive with your clay. Good Luck!