Reviews for Amnesia

[deathblade07]

I liked it pretty well.

First I'll talk about the good things (unlike the last freak don't know what his problem was):
1. Good character (good animations and design and such)
2. Awesome effects (the swirling cloud part was cool)
3. Sweet amount of detail (you actually took the time to "make" the shoes)
4. Very realistic shadows
5. etc.

Bad:
1. Needs a better plot (most of it was him just chillin in the desert and then at the end we actually got a little storyline)
2. Was just a tad bit random near the end with the whole building with a guy who has a bat thing, but it didn't really damage my the score I've given, just sayin it was a bit random...
But anyway... great flash animation and skill wise... but needs a better story. Keep it up!

Haroshi responds:

Thankyou for the indepth review,
abot the story... I guess you can take deeper meaning into it and say you gradualy learn about the story as he gradualy starts to remember his past.

Well i'm glad you liked it because i've been devoted to it for 4 months (probably 2 weeks work time if you put it all together).

p.s. I could beat you at tony hawk \^_^/

[louis-brannon]

well

its a very avarage flash but i suck at flash so i cant talk but it was avarage i will give it a 3. like i said its not bad just ok mabye not my stye

Haroshi responds:

Dam I've had trhee reviews of people saying it's not their style : (

Oh well thanks for your insight

[Sabredontis]

Good Music-Video Sync, but I don't get the idea

Alright, so you find yourself in amnesia, in the middle of a desert. To be frank, I don't get the video from the point where the gun comes into view. What is it with the weird ending? Is there going to be a sequel or something?

I liked the song selection and the synching of the music into the video was perfect. The graphics were great, but looked a little blank. Overall, the video is worth a peek, if you get it, that is.

Haroshi responds:

Well it makes sense in my head but i'll explain.

I wake up In the desert with amnesia right and I just walk around not knowing who I am, where I am, or what to.
When night comes I make a fire to collect my thoughts, then the memories come back of me shooting someone.
When I wake up the peice of paper hits my face, and if you read it it says about me having extensive gun training etc. (fictionl)
Then I see the cabin and I am frustrated angry that they have imformation about me.
Then I smash down the door (learnt in the military) and find loads of files on me.
Then the guy who works for the people documenting me sneaks up with a baseball bat and thwacks me round the head.

So basically it's a bit like the 'bourne identity' (only just noticed that.

[Statuess]

For your GCSEs?!

Wow! You get to do THAT for your art GCSE?! >< Not fair! I have no where near that kind of freedom, not that I could make something like that anyway..! (BTW, what year are you in? 11? 'Cos you look WAY more mature than the guys in my year!)

^^ It's really good. As I said, I would never be capable of something like that!

Haroshi responds:

Yeah i'm in year 11, I just look older due to my 'pedro' esque tach.

What happend is that I had been making it normaly and then I was talking to my art teacher about what I want to do in the future. I told her how I want to be an animator, and how I had a flash on the web and another in production.
Then she let me use it as a project.

The down point to an animation project is that it takes much longer than regular art, you still need loads of development work, and you cant put it up on a display board for moderation >.<

Apart from that I have no regrets and I fell that it is much more rewarding than a normal piece of art.

[pankacksNcabbage]

boring

rock heavy meatal, or what ever that song is those are really stoopid songs and the face was not drawn that good but the shoes where awesome I cant draw those at all im only good at drawing the upper body but other then that you are set on the shoes but to short and no plot

Haroshi responds:

I'm confused with your grading, the best marks you gave me were 3 for graphics but you give me a 7 overall. How "stoopid' ( as you might say).

Well at least neither of us likes linkin par...
oh wait... XD