Nice to get your feet wet
Your first submission, eh? Interesting approach. You seemed to try to do the best with what you know how to do- ie, words instead of lip sync, different images instead of movement, etc. Not very good, as a flash, but a great exercise in making one. If it gets blammed, don't be discouraged. Anything like this takes experience to get good at. Keep at it!
Thanks for your critisism.
Ive been using flash for a few months now after doing a course in it at uni, but this is my first real animation. Im an interface desinger you see, not an artist.
However, I do intend to put more things on newgrounds/devart in this style. Hopefully next time though, more animation.
Eh, hasnt been a review since 06
Didnt like it. sorry.
was to "Buggy"