It's ok.
I voted it a 5 because its your first flash submited, and its a game so that probably means that with some time and encouragement youll probably make something really good soon enough.
Reviews for "Asterisk's Adventure Beta"
can be a lot better
First of, need sounds...quickly
Second, make him jump higher, just a bit higher, and make the jump have an acceleration, I mean, when you jump on mario, or sonic, when the chara gets near the maximum heigh, the jump speed slows down till it came to 0
Special powers...make some power, nothing great, a shoot thing, or some wall grab...A great game for you to get a reference is Gish.
Make the stages longer and with more enemies and puzzles...
Have a lot of potential, keep up the good work
yeah
ok
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wat thats it?
I liked that
just wish it had been longer