Reviews for Short Attention 1

[Apothesis]

I liked it.

In fact, I liked much more than the ones that usually make front page! Make it longer, and add voices, or if you can't add any, give people a bit longer to read what they're saying.

[DeclinedMemory]

Cool

Heres a big tip. Use more frames. You want to ATLEAST double the amount you did there. And get some better music. But i liked the characters. nice work for a first.

[Clubbaseal]

I love clay

That was kind of fun. If you make another, keep it short, unless you have a cohesive plot.