it was cool...
wow...this is not the best of the best, but it`s still very good! gave me some laughs, keep it up!
Reviews for "Robo-Pico."
nice
haha that was actually pretty cool. Shot but cool.
ok
i really didnt get the point of that but i like the robo pico kinda cool lol
EdwinsGeneration responds:
lol thx the point of it was for a newgrounds 'holiday' called 'pico day' hehe
Not bad
You know,that wasnt bad! graphics were shit but I loved the idea of killing strawberry clock I hate him! Sound was awesome and who is that and what song is it? Violence well,see style.Humor I loved seeing strawbeery clock die! Anyway try put more effort in your next flash but apart from that,pretty decent!
EdwinsGeneration responds:
thanks yeah i did it in like 3 hours i had to do it extremely fast and rush unfortunately because it was PICO DAY and I wanted to make something fast! thx again :D btw its Korn's "Liar"
It is
++++ Made me smile with its silliness. The idea of robopico... the ending...
---- The graphics are inconsistent and somewhat bad. You have the gun from a photo or whatever plonked in and it really doesn't go with anything else. If this'd been a mixed media piece that woulda been cool, but seeing as it's just that one thing... Also, the thin lines on the bullet don't really go with the thick lines of the character, I think.
The wobbly lines didn't look too good in this piece. If it'd been really sketchy throughout, my opinion might be different, but it looks as if you just need to practise your drawing and keep at it.
Lastly, maybe do a level of shading on the close-ups.
+++ Some lip-synching.
---- The song seems to carry on after the movie has finished. No need. Set it to stream, fade it out and Flash will abandon the unused frames, making for a much lower filesize for the same experience.
overall
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It is technically crappy. You just need practise. I liked the joke though.
EdwinsGeneration responds:
hahaha i truly appreciate your honest review and im happy that someone with flash knowledge/experience finally reviewed it! Anywho.. All of ur points are valid but heres my reasons for them
Graphics ARE inconsistent ..i made it in about 3 hours or more ..completely rushed solely for the purpose of 'pico day' haha so its ok.. I know wut u mean by shadin close ups i just got lazy fo real plus i mean i didnt think i would spend so much time on a NG holiday flash.. I should have indeed quit the song tho
Thanks :)