what I am doing?
hahaha... the hair guy had the rhythm. I believe that there were not ''forces'' in making the movie with regard to the graphics and animation, becuase the style of the movie is it would be on a girl that draws. is it this way? . You had put a loader and a menu. Or something, but we have to see to the other ones to see what they say.
That's just a doodle of myself as part of the credits; My "character" isn't part of the story. I added it as a joke, that the "studios" are made up of only one person.
Merple?
Havent this much mixed feelings since i found out that one of the hottest models in racing was a hermaphrodite...
Breakdown:
Graphics: 4
It wasn't bad...but it wasnt really animated...well the dancing wasn't... I liked it but you could have actuallly gone and animated them but then i think you wanted it like that but it seems like a waste to use flash and not animatethe dancing yunno? We it was welll done but the choppy daning, though intended, may just get this submission blammed.... I liked it personally but mot others may not...
Style:7
IT was cutesy and fun, and there was a llama...horse...thingy...i couldnt tell that it was a llama, thought it was horse till i read the blurb. I liked it though.
Sound: 10
The syncing was good and the music was fun and lively. Kudos to the artist for that.
Violence: 0
Do real violence here.
Interactivity:0
Was a movie:
Humor: 9
It was funny and gave me a chuckle:
OVerall: 7
Great start, if your using flash. USe all of it. Actually animate your stuff, it is kinda of a waste to make it all choppy when you have this incrediblle power at your hands. PLus animating like this doen'st really show case your skills as a FBF animator.....
Well ood job and good luck on your next one. Good luck to you.
Yay, thanks for an in-depth critique! Glad you liked the bits that I thought mattered in this project. My second project will definitely encompass all the improvements you mentioned, and hopefully show people what I'm truly capable of.
lol
I usually don't like stick figures but that one made me laugh! ;)
Nice! ^^ I like that it amuses people.
Good first try :)
It's hard working on your first flash, and there are a lot of critical people out there. But every one has to start somewhere...
The graphics weren't impressive, but they didn't need to be.
The toon was funny and happy, and it's obvious you had fun making it.
Keep at it and you'll get better and better
Thanks for the support! And yes, I had a blast. ^^
HAPPY FEET!
Hey, this was cute, a valiant first effort. You caught the expressions and the enthuisiam of your "characters" very well. It was kind of weak on plot (No Plot? No Problem!) but I'm sure you will pay more attention to that as you go on and do more little movies. Do go on and do more! I look forward to seeing them. And the music was awesome, btw!
That Hobbit Lady