first flash you say?
that was an unexpexted ending seein as the music was saying 'evil...evil....evil', i was waiting for neturi to turn evil or something.
Animation was better than most submissions nowadays and you managed a humor which is even more rare aswell.
I can see you earning yourself a small reputation :)
pretty good
it had some good animation for the charater, but that bottle sucked
also it didn't really make sense, is the bottle full of laxitive or something?
and third of all Water Closet?! come on dude who honestly call it that?
Room for Improvment
Use the Newgrounds PreLoader, I didn't know when this was going to start. The graphics for this are okay and the effects for sound are good but you could do with some voice's in this and try to make them last longer, but for a first, it is good. Keep going.
guud
i liked this it woz very gud for your first flash .. if this gets blammed from first hand experience i no how u feel