Ok..
Alright it's not awful, and you are experimenting (please do that offline)
Your sound needs a little work on the sync and you have a music over lap.
Fix your transitions a bit and you'll be doing well.
Ok..
Alright it's not awful, and you are experimenting (please do that offline)
Your sound needs a little work on the sync and you have a music over lap.
Fix your transitions a bit and you'll be doing well.