Could be better, but not much
Well this is good. Very good, but it was too short in my opinion. I like that you use very abstract forms in this Music video, but I'm certainly not the only one unable to read this movie if it has sense. And you made other movies which I thought had more effort in them, what I try to say is that not every animation is clean.
But as I judge the overall effect by most, I have to say pretty damn straight.