Dude...
Dude... Dude... ya did good re-doing the characters and s**t... But I would say... Use a diff. voicing style or something cuz in my whole honest opinion (I don't usually do bad reviews) it was just f**kin wrong... The girl... Didn't really match the voice IMO, along with the way that the piano was picked up... Ya made her look kinda weak, plus... Well... I think ya get my point right? I'm running out of words her as it is cursing my friend off... But keep up the good work and try to create something original k?