Sonnet or Not?
The whole thing was a very good film. It was a very solid three, at the very least. I only had one problem with it, and that was that you changed your rhyme scheme a few times from an interesting AA
B
CC
to an
ABAB
CDCD
EFEF
GG
Or as it's better know, the rhyme scheme of a sonnet. That's the only thing. Nex ttime stick to one rhyme scheme and it'll be perfect.