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Reviews for "(WF1) F-777- Phantom (Fin"

hmmmm

sound weird but its still quite good
nice 1

wyldfyre1 responds:

Glad ya liked it even dispite its weirdness haha.

Quite good,

Though i gotta admit, the loop is pretty bad but other than that i think its good!

wyldfyre1 responds:

the loop? heh i don't think we made it as a loop

Here's my critique.

8/10 +1 for originality, so I think you earned a 9/10. Here's my critique.
The heartbeat you had before :50 seemed a bit dull. Try using a different sound or modulate it so it sounds more definite, clear. The riff going on around 1:35 sounded very good. 1:57 should probably be slowed down by about 5 bpm or so to fit with the prior part as well as give you the emphasis on the following section that you're looking for.At 2:13 you should consider going back into the full orchestra just like you had at the beginning and then give a drop ride to the part you placed at 2:13. It would give your song the length that it just falls short of. The ending sounded very abrupt and didn't give the feeling of 'epic continuation' like the music could go on forever. I know you are good at that, as you have done so in many of your other pieces.

At least consider my recommendations for a remix or similar future work. Hopefully it can help. It sounded really good and your originality and variety continues to amaze many people whom visit the audio portal specifically for you.
Great job overall, oh and I almost forgot, your modulation at 1:07 was Very Nice.

Have a good one as always,
Donler

wyldfyre1 responds:

Heh i'm not sure we'll be doing a remix of this track but i do like the idea's i MAY try some of this just to get a new outlook on it =) Thanks for the review as always and i'm glad you enjoyed it.

cool song

not your best collab but its cool

wyldfyre1 responds:

I still love you!

Reminissences of Necrofantasia

Your song reminds me to some Touhou songs. Necrofantasia is the most related to this. Did you inspired in that awesome creation of ZUN?

wyldfyre1 responds:

Not sure what really inspired us other then halloween itself hah.