Great
The animation really enchances the feeling of the music.
I like the way you portrayed this really Noir song.
Although the animation seemed a little simple.
Reviews for "Jeny was a friend of mine"
good concept
one of my favorite songs, I'm glad somone made a video for it. the stor was good too, liked it. my only big annoyance was the people, not the rest of the graphics,s imply the people. I'm sorry but those were absolute shit. stick figures would of looked nicer. Just, next time please make half-way decent characters.
Really good!
I liked it, your style of animation could use some improvement but I really like how you made it into a flash music video. I really think you two should complete this flash. 4/5 GJ
Good, not great.
The drawings weren't the best in the world but they were good-- the main problems with them that I saw was that you overused gradients, didn't use a style that looked good and didn't match up with itself (for example, the outlines of the characters and backgrounds [for the most part] were smooth and done with lines, then you used an unsmoothed paintbrush tool with a color too dark in contrast to the previous color for the shading, making the style look sort of noobish if i say so myself). The animation was good, more movement could have made the flash a whole lot better but it was good enough. When you make another movie, also, try to make the violence seem more realistic. the guy wouldn't just sit there and take the punch, he would at least flinch or react or bleed or something. Also, something that could've raised my score for sound up by ALOT was that you could have compressed the sound differently. It's good that you at least streamed it, though. Another more unusual problem that i noticed with this is that occasionally some symbol used in the movie would be on a higher layer than the quality menu... before you submit another movie to newgrounds, make sure to spend more time screening it for simple errors like this. that didn't lower the score any though, but having a less glitchy movie makes you seem more proffessional.
You chose a good place to end the movie and it was actually a decent music video though-- you'll get alot better, just keep making flash and take constructive critisism like this review into mind. I'm really not trying to be offensive by saying any of this, so don't get mad.
Overall score: 7/10
Good, but not great.
well ya kno....
ok so i was about to shut my window before viewing this simply cuz it said "the killers" and man do i hate that band. but ur flash actually made me like this song. If i heard this song alone, i'd hate it tho lol. But yea, great story telling abilities, your pencil strokes could use a lil bit of work, but other than that wicked movie man, thumbs up to ya.