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Reviews for "-Pickles-"

Lol

The background looked pretty good, and the character was funny.
Perhaps a little unoriginal because we all know the pickle jar cliché.

Lacking a story

But that's about it-good style and pretty well animated.

As far as the jokes go, timing was the key; and it worked about half the time.

Keep it up.

Ideas

In spite of graphics following a certain style, it would most likely profit from being more detailed. But that's for the next time. At least that's not Mario sprites like the previous one, you've done some real drawing.

Think of surprising people when you make jokes - actually, surprise is considered to be the key element of humor. When the kid drew the RPG at once, that was fun. But when he waited for the can to fall upon him for several seconds, the actual fall came in not so great. E.g., he could have walked away for another thing (can of pickles to eat or a flamethrower to deliver his anger), and then get hit by the can from the blue. Just an example, that one, but the faster you keep improving, the better for us viewers.

Kaputnik responds:

That's a good point. Well, I'll hopefully keep improving if I always get such good reviews!

A little advice...

Your timing was a little off with the sync for the kid's voice over. You might want to move that back a couple frames to sync a little better. Also, when he moved his arm, the way he was drawn caused it to look like he had a hunch back, because you just kind of drew the arm in on top of what was already there (where he had one hand behind his back). Other than that, this was pretty funny. I know how frustrating those stupid pickle jars can be, as does my baseball bat.

Kaputnik responds:

thanks for the advice and the positive review! :)

cute...

cute...For a begginer...=)