good job
you have a lot of talent. keep up the good work. i can't say there's anything that you could improve on unless it would be the length of your flash. it's a tad short...i looked away from the screen for about 2 seconds and it was over. your graphics and sound were excellent, and i had the change the quality of the flash since it kept lagging up. but that aside, great job. continue making flash and you will have great success.
bad spelling is a crime.