Not sure what to say
Had to rate it 5/10 because I really don't think Fresh's voice suits this type of song, no doubt he's talented but I just don't see it fitting, Wordplay on the otherhand fits this song great, so I agree with one of the previous reviews here saying beef up the vocals.
Another thing is I thought this song started amazing, and ended great as well, but the 2nd part was pretty poor compared to the 1st and last, so I feel it needs work, but then again you guys know best.
Good work anyway, I'd never be able to do anything like this.