nice beggining chords (fifths?)
The synths are really nice and relaxing, and the edgy bass gives the song intensity, but still blends with the synths
the edgy bass synth at 1:05 is a bit loud by the time the other synths come in. it just feels sort of crowded at places, and maybe it would help if you turned it down, or leaned it to one side
the drums seem like they could also go a lot farther than they are going, maybe a few drum fills here and there might help
the high synth at the end suggests that the song will go on into a bridge or something, so it felt like the song just ended at the middle. it's really good where it's at, but the ended suggested that something more was going to happen.
some high, smooth, quiet synths in the background would sound nice if you put it in when the edgy synth at 1:05 comes in
i really enjoyed this piece! It's definetly not something i would make (though i don't know anybody that makes music like mine), but the melodies and blend are really nice. Great job! 8/10 4/5