well......
just work on the audio and the spelling errors. not bad, just needs fine tuning!
well......
just work on the audio and the spelling errors. not bad, just needs fine tuning!
not bad
it wasnt that bad, but the only part that was funny was at they end when it said the moral of the story is that girls shouldnt drive XD
that was cute but...
you shovanistic arg garg! while that was a cute and well done flash...girls shouldn't drive...best drivers in the world are female....but aside from that i enjoyed the peice:)
Wow that was fast.
Ok here are three reasons why I didn't give you a ten.
1) too short. you didnt show their situation in battle or their fiery death
2) no battle
3) not as much humor as I thought
Good job all you have to improve on is length, humor, and stronger scenes. I hope I'll see these improvements. I loved the moral however sexist it was it was funny.
Hilarious
Nice! I never saw that end coming. Unexpected and witty.