Screamo?
Sorry, but Screamo just doesn't fit into an animation of Tim Burton off his meds. The story was... confusing. Yes, you can make a decent Noir story without talking, but there were times when I had no idea what was going on.
Like, why do we switch locations between a man's house and a graveyard?
Is the man considering making out with her corpse or does he think the girl is alive again?
Why does the girl switch between angel and seductress? Stick with one personality, please.
Is the girl in the graveyard the ghost of his wife or someone else entirely?
Why the hell was she able to raise the dead?
You need to EXPLAIN what's going on to your audience, or show us through the power of pretentious Noir art.
On the positive side, this did seem to have its own unique style, the shading really helped and the and the animation itself was great, but you need a clearer story and music that fits better to the atmosphere. Seriously, it was kind of freaky before the Screamo douche started barking into his microphone.