You got skills but this just didnt work
First of all its too "costumey" . So it comes off as cheesy. It would have been much better as a futuristic story but set like 50 or so years in the future with more everyday clothing like people wear now but a bit more futuristic. would have given it more gravity
The main character would have been better in a long trench coat. Although the villian's costume was okay.
Then the humor was just tacky. But I know alot of others probably will like it.
Personally I would have liked to see voice acting but that can get complicated. The comic format was okay.
Over all the drawing was excellent. But the story as it is now, is rather bulky and doesnt take off.
Lot of hard work though.