Disturbing lyrics, catchy music
The simplicity of the music is somewhat counterbalanced by the lyrics that go for shock, as opposed to actual musical accomplishment. The way that everything sounds all together is slightly off putting as a tune, but it's akin to a song that small children would sing, as opposed to the shock value of "So What", by the Anti-Nowhere League, for example.
With the way that everything is set out, it's not too bad a tune and I can certainly say that you've got the potential, but doing more with the keyboards, as opposed to just having the backing drum beat on there, you could make a professional sounding piece that would take your lyrics to the next level.
[Review Request Club]