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Reviews for "NewbieScape 4 Members"
meh
sorry to say but i did not like this video as much as the others, as usual the voice acting is a little off and the graphics kinda suck, but this time i didn't really think it was that funny, still good
Not To Good
The first thing you need to do for this series is get better voice actors. Once you have acquired these better voice actors write the dialouge... well, better. Most of it was rather small stuff, but get someone whom knows the English language better because the way it is now is kind of irritating to read and listen to. Also, if you are going to scream, please, scream. Don't be afraid to hold the mic back from your mouth and scream, "Nooo!" into it, because when you try to scream in a quiet voice it sounds, well, horrible. The overal audio quality was pretty damn bad, so I think you should mainly focus on that for upcoming episodes. The graphics are bad and the animation is pretty choppy. The humor wasn't bad, but the audio quality and how the dialouge was written really brings it down. Also, I believe you used that "I had a stroke" joke straight from "The Simpsons" and although it is nice to see a continuing joke used throughout a series it isn't as nice when that joke has been stolen (plus, the way the character whom had a stroke sounds bad). I believe I have touched on everything, sorry if it is hard to read, it's 6:00 AM, I haven't slept yet, and I've got something else to do so I'm rather rushing this review. Basically you need better voice actors, better dialouge, better artwork, smoother animation, and huzzah! You'll have a great series. The humor is really brought down by the audio quality, I can't put enough emphasis on that (well I probably could, but...). Good day and I'm looking foward to the next installment in this series.
Lopaxe responds:
i respect to your advises... only 1 thing. Y the hell u spent so much time on this review if ur not going to rate it high? :p
i dont understand.
why wouldnt people believe you made it it sucks
Lopaxe responds:
I curse swedish fish on you!
Improvements
Lose the damn accents! Talk normally!
Write better scripts. I'm sure you can do better than "The shopkeeper has a nice hat".
Apart from that keep it up.