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Reviews for "Roffie N' Afro 01"
Haha made me laugh
~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this one made me laugh, the characters were actually good and it made me laugh so you did have some humor here just was abit short, maybe it should have had more small animations or something
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more to this one or add a number of small animations in this one so that its like a colab or something
~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining but a tad too short
~X~
Not bad.
some selected aspects (rated from ----- to +++++)
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----- :( :( :( :( :( I remember you saying on the Afro forums (which I once checked by) that if you guys were to ever do a flash, it wouldn't be something lousy like various groups. Dude. This is encroaching on that territory.
++++ The slow version of Girl got Back, or whatever the 'big butt' song is called, is fantastic. Suits the silly mood well.
+++ Cool intro song too.
++ I like the fonts you use throughout.
++ Roflmuffin's character is nicely drawn.
- Afrostar and the bg less so.
++++ I did kinda smile at the contents of the episode.
+: detail of sfx+monospaced typewriter-style font at end
Ultimately, any criticism I have isn't so much with what is here, but what isn't. It's just trying to be a short little joke and whilst I smiled, it doesn't rock my world. Humour's subjective. That's all you were trying for, it seems.
overall
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Well, any humour's derived from the randomness and shortness. It works to some extent as it made me smile.
But it didn't make me laugh.
eww...
*walks over to AfroStar and Hoses him down with a Highpowerd water Hose* there all clean *Tosses PpinkSsoda a B33r* funny and yet Sick nTwisted......In a good way.
~RampageClock~
Rank: Elite Guard Staff Sergeant
Heh
Well this was a random series, a nice choice of main characters, and simple animation as well, but it's really missing plot and length. Keep working on it!
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