good
You made up sonic characters that resemble the real ones and you got a awesome story line.You just need to make the music better and not loop so often and make buttons for the flash. And put the storyline together. You have talent and you could make a very good sonic parody.
Thanks for voting everyone! Remember to press SPACE BAR. I didn't know i could get through, my brother has made many more episodes. I have to plot my own it's going to prove difficult.
Not bad, however,...
I like your Sonic parody, and I do like the concept, however, you need to work on your interactivity. It appears I have to right click and click play every time I want to proceed to either the next screen or the next subtitle. It was good but you need to be more careful when making high interactive flash movies ok? Do keep up the good work but dont forget to be careful when developing them because flash movies with disfunctional features can get low scores. Did my review help you any?
very good new series
i hope to see more of this series and im just throwing this out there as something u could put in the next one a next button, if there is one and im not seeing it disregard that if there isnt try and fit one into the next one if possible. but other than that this is a great flash keep it up
Sorry had to vote all like that lol anyway
This is good. I made one with a difficult plot once those are good. Yet I used to suck at flash and they got blammed. Sonic Canned etc. Anyway you took my place to make one with a difficult plot. I should see if the people like it. Yet your flash abilities need to improve. I prefer doing humble plots but that's in the future
Great Potential
Because I really liked the potential of this submission, I'm going to give it a very critical review. Visually and structurally, you are very talented. The animations and worlds were perfect, and the way the characters interacted and fought was interesting. Your plot ideas were unique but:
1. Far too many characters, with nothing to distinguish one from another. You can't bombard someone with all of that so fast.
2. The plot was FAR too complicated. Simplify, it'll still be interesting and cool. You just were trying way too hard, and ending up with a sort of flimsy Sonic The Hedgehog Matrix. And there weren't enough details to make the first chapter stand alone. Some things being left unsolved in a chapter are okay, but something has to happen, something has to be accomplished.
3. The RPG battle scene was pointless. Just have them fight like they do everywhere else in the flash. That was good enough.
Good work, keep it up!