Good lyrics.
They just progress at a too slow rate though. The music was really good but try to use some different melodies every now and then but even so but it wasn't even that repetitive because it was a really good melody. And when you say together and forever when you add a delay echo effect, they start to overlap eachother and sound sort of morphed.
But that's about the only things wrong. Everything else deserves a 10.
drums = 10/10
music = 10/10
vocals = 9/10
lyrics = 10/10
repetition 9.5/10
Overall score = 10/10.
Good job.
If you fixed those things out, this song could become a big hit in your coming future.