Congratz
1 - Congrats on making a vocal track. Many people are a bit shy to sing on NG and there are TONS of instrumental tracks but never enough vocal ones.
2 - Nice backing track, quite well mixed.
What I would fix:
- I would put a low cut on the voice (you can safely cut out everything below 125Hz or even more).
- Layer down some backing voices and play with panning.
- If you pitch correct do it smooth so nobody can tell or do it extreme (T-Pain effect lol)
Yeah haha I'll have to definitely look into backing voices :P That might take me awhile. Thanks so much!!
ShootingStar
Pretty good.
Great composition. I really like the chord progression.
One thing I don't like is the EQ on the vocal. Its way to bassy. Also the autotune is a bit wobbly. I know that its really hard to do (from experience) :P. Try using Melodyne for tuning stuff, it rocks.
But yeah, good job for using your own vocals.
8/10
5/5 (decided to vote 5 anyways xD)
<TeK>
I like!
This is one of the better trance songs iv heard with actual vocals from the artist.
All the sounds mesh together very well and the track has a nice flow with some nice effects.
All in all Great Job & Keep it Up.
-ZERO-
Big up for making ur own vocals
Respect for making your own vocals and lyrics
You should of made a pop screen for your mic though.
Haha I use probably one of the worst mics :P it's supposed to be for smartmusic.. Haha but thanks for the review!!
ShootingStar
Good lyrics.
They just progress at a too slow rate though. The music was really good but try to use some different melodies every now and then but even so but it wasn't even that repetitive because it was a really good melody. And when you say together and forever when you add a delay echo effect, they start to overlap eachother and sound sort of morphed.
But that's about the only things wrong. Everything else deserves a 10.
drums = 10/10
music = 10/10
vocals = 9/10
lyrics = 10/10
repetition 9.5/10
Overall score = 10/10.
Good job.
If you fixed those things out, this song could become a big hit in your coming future.
Yeah haha I didn't really do much for the song :P I'm probably not going to fix any of the stuff.. just keep it in mind for the next song. I'm lazy :D
Thanks for the review!!
ShootingStar