i liked the intro
however, i think the rough synth was a little misplaced with its melody imo. That might be what you were working on for so long lol, but yeah i liked the intro a lot. But the rest of it i just couldnt bring myself to like. Either that instrument or the drums seem out of place to me, depending on what you figure is right lol. especially nearing the ending of this one.
good work, but i think it needs some modification, especially after 0:38.