~ Review Request Club ~
This has a great original sound to it, but it really needed more content. It's all beats and could really use some more instruments and sounds here. By itself it can get rather repetitive and boring.
I really thought I was listening to the same sound loop over and over after awhile since there really wasn't much variety. It's really all I can think about saying about this submission. It had a different sound to it, but not enough variety.
~ Review Request Club ~
Requesting delivery of a melody STAT!
Sorry, but a collection of beats isn't going to get you anywhere, not even on the rave scene, as you need something to give the beat purpose. As the piece currently stands, there is a good selection of beats that you've put together, but it is like a modelling kit. You can see the pieces, but you haven't assembled it and there are no paints or stickers to use, so even if you did build it, you would be missing the detail.
I'm sure you can come up with some good detail in the melody that would suit a design brief of, say, a 4x4 commercial, so head back to the drawing board and work on it.
[Review Request Club]
Not necessarily a melody...
...but something that actually adds flare to the song. This might be able to serve as background music to a movie, game, etc., but not as a listener-friendly song that members would flock to download.
3/5. Sounds like something Matt Darey would play.