Not necessarily a melody...
...but something that actually adds flare to the song. This might be able to serve as background music to a movie, game, etc., but not as a listener-friendly song that members would flock to download.
3/5. Sounds like something Matt Darey would play.
Requesting delivery of a melody STAT!
Sorry, but a collection of beats isn't going to get you anywhere, not even on the rave scene, as you need something to give the beat purpose. As the piece currently stands, there is a good selection of beats that you've put together, but it is like a modelling kit. You can see the pieces, but you haven't assembled it and there are no paints or stickers to use, so even if you did build it, you would be missing the detail.
I'm sure you can come up with some good detail in the melody that would suit a design brief of, say, a 4x4 commercial, so head back to the drawing board and work on it.
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This has a great original sound to it, but it really needed more content. It's all beats and could really use some more instruments and sounds here. By itself it can get rather repetitive and boring.
I really thought I was listening to the same sound loop over and over after awhile since there really wasn't much variety. It's really all I can think about saying about this submission. It had a different sound to it, but not enough variety.
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Nice Effects!
Good, very good, you are rising, young one.
Very good drums, they were a bit generic but i'll let that go.
The bass that was in it was epic but as Haggard said, needs to be bassier, it needs pure, pulse-pounding, Wall-Breaking, Bass!
It's also a bit repetetive but the intro and outtro pay back for everything in this case ;-)
8/10
3/5
<Deejay>
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Nice beat!!
I liked the beat in the beggining, it's very nice, the drums fit w/ the main beat, they work very well together, you shulda try more musics w/ this combo... It would be very nice!!
The synts are super cool, they give a special thing to the music, w/out them, the music would be boring. But you put some synts, the music is very cool.
I think you can variate more the beats in the music, because it gets too repetitive, it could have more things, the drums could be a little louder, i can't hear it sometimes...
The music is very short, i didn't see the time passing, you made a nice atmosphere, the music give you a nice feeling, it's not so electric and it's not so normal...
Keep it up Kieran!!
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Roger