Reviews for Crebe Episode-Three

[FlashesOfBrilliance]

Ok, but some major problems...

I will admit i haven't watched episode 1 and 2 but just watching this I found some major problems you should work on:
1) Get rid of the random german. It doesn't make any freaking sense.
2) Triple check for spelling and grammar errors. There were quite a few. If you have to copy paste your text into microsoft word, do it.
3) Some of the characters didn't makelogical decisions. Deciding to tell a very long story when you are rushing to save your friend wouldn't be something I'd do. Also walking off to get resources because you are bored with your friend being knocked out on the beach isn't a very good idea either.
Overall it was ok, but the above things need to be fixed.

Skeik responds:

lol, yeah, i geuss i wouldnt walk off if im running low on foodon a deserted planet, when i havent eaten for days.

[kgsshksnh]

I don't see why it's popular

The story sucks, Theres shitty animated fights, a bunch of tweens thrown together, I just can't see what's so good about it

<3
Pirate

Skeik responds:

I dont see why you have to be a bitch and use multiple accounts to lower myt submissions score.

[Nurannu]

Very Creative

This was a very creative storyline, however, I think you need to work on the animation. Try to make the backround and main images clearer and smoother.

Skeik responds:

maybe i forgot to turn some of them to PNG. CHecked, i didnt. WHat do you mean by "not clear"