Nice
Pretty good man! My only problem is your drums, you have some pretty nice "acidy" sounds going on for the instruments. But on the drums - definitely look around and listen to how others do it, personally, I prefer hard breakbeat drums when it comes to this kind of stuff, so look for a nice "harsh" hi-hat and definitely a solid kick. But overall, really great job!!
Haha keep working on it and you'll get good :)
ShootingStar
you mean how the drums are rolling or how the drums sound ? ( pm me please :) )
but thanks!
Nice
I like the movement and composition. But there would be a few things I would change. I would make the snare a little bit more snappy. The bass muffles the punchy kick. Maybe eqing may help or sidechaining. Its pretty good.
drum set is in my list of points i want to do yet :p
eqing also and sidechaining is there already, but i need to redo my kick too
that could make it better already
Maybe i'll get some more sidechaining in there, but i need to see how it looks like, after i did all that points ;)
thanks!
Fun
like all i can say..
synth is my taste
like idk wat words to say
but an all natura'l
newgrounds music
ok ty
Good
But maybe more things like melody (stabs to accompany the bass melody?) and varied, and cut up drums. Something a bit new. I like your snare, btw.
And some vocal samples always go down well. Dramatic lines from films right before the drop, etc.
yeah, anyway, good work, and keep it up :)
ok cool! i'll try it all
Getting better
I like your instruments alot, but tbh, your 'systole' song was pure shit. This is quite an improvement over your first songs.
Chop up the melody a bit, more instruments doesn't hurt either.
yup it was shit,
gotta say this, i was trying to reopen this file after some months ( 2 days ago ) because my computer was being reprogrammed, i tried to open it then, but when i opened it, my FL closed just a second later, so i'm kinda in problems working further on this one -.-'