great concepts
You should have left out the halflife guy...he didn't do anything but sit there.....if he haddn't been there noone would notice
Reviews for "Virtual Winners Club"
not bad
it was an alright animation. a bit random overall, but it was still cool to watch and a pretty good effort was put into this one too.
Jake-Gaudet responds:
Wow You write a lot of reviews
thanks for the good one
Jake
lol
I laughed when you said resident evil and gta:san andreas were FPS... FIRST PERSON SHOOTER! Resident evil and gta are TPS or sumtin, third person shooter, completly different genre of game.
Anyway this was quite good, good script, ok animation.
Jake-Gaudet responds:
It was a flagrant slip on my part
Nice Script
The script is the main thing in your favor for this Flash.
The writing was pretty funny for a 15 year old. The voice talent wasn't that good.
Animation and art weren't anything spectacular. But you CAN draw. You know how to put detail in your Flash - but you could work on even greater character and background detail in the next movie.
One thing that kind of upset me is - the build up to this movie made me think it was going to be some climactic battle thing... It wasn't. I agree, Freeman should have lines (think Silent Bob style).
Anyways, this should survive, it isn't bad at all... Keep making 'em, I s'pose.
- 3/5 -
Jake-Gaudet responds:
Thank you for the good, helpful, review
Pretty good
Evrything seemed to be okay. But even though Gordon dont talk in HL or HL2 u should really put some voice in a sequel if u make one. It would make the flash alot better that way.