not bad at all!
could use a little fine tuning, but i'll definitely be watching out for more of your flashes. the random audio blurbs were a bit unusual (have you used them before? i havent seen your other work yet) and in a few parts the art was a bit rough, but i thought it was very interesting and deep. and yeah sort of random how it starts out communist and ends.. not so communist. also could you put the songs up next time? i saw you listed the song artists, but i was curious of what songs you used, so if you could list those next time that would be sweet